Pitch Your Ideas (U21: P4, M3)

Learning Outcome 3 (U21):  Be able to pitch ideas on a proposed media product and respond to questions (P4, M3)



1) NoLoRap - might need text underneath > e.g. North London Rap- just to make the title more clear
2) 14 - 16 age range seems too tight - where are the 17 year olds? Will you change this?
3) Don't include the school grades - muddled up with social grades
4) Purpose slides - one picture was not a hip hop concert - make sure all images are relevant to the presentation
5) Article idea slides - nothing related to rap - i was using the images as prompts but they weren't relevant for my audience - use text instead.
6) Unclear what the difference is between online and app. Make sure this is apparent and clarify the difference
7) Mood board and existing competition are essentially the same - mood board needs to include colours, artists, inspirations (graffiti art, settings ect.) attract audiences with colour
8) Good main font, what about the other fonts that I will be using in the magazine?
9) Should have shown the mocked-up version of the front cover and double page spread
10) Is there a big enough market in North London ? Why do no rival magazines exist ? Is it because there is no market?
11) Is the audience too narrow to do a whole magazine on?